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January 14, 2013
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Looking forward
to the end of the world
counting the days,
world disasters,

Counting the hours,
waiting impatiently
it's almost here
the final day of war,
and I can hear the zombies
crying outside the door.

We're down to the seconds
it's all ready to blow
no more promised tomorrows.

I've been looking forward to this
for a very long time
the end draws near,
but I'll wake up
and everything will be just fine.

Looking Forward to xKrittterz

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse©2013-2014 xKrittterz

Dear Writers Block-
Please go away soon.
Well, for starters it's not as catchy as REM's "It's The End Of The World As We Know It (And I Feel Fine) but I can see how you're anxiously awaiting the end of the world, not with a sense of dread, but rather, you're looking [i]forward[/i] to it.

It seems by the looks of it, it's as if there is a chain of events that started from natural disasters, ending with a zombie apocalypse, with an armageddon to finish it all off, so that's the reason you're looking forward to it.

Though a degree of insanity seems to play a part in the last part, especially the lines "but I'll wake up / and everything will be just fine." which is quite an abnormal stance to take if you're looking forward to the end of the world, and wake up the next morning with a nicely cooked breakfast awaiting you.

I like it.
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